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The best visuals I've ever seen in a VN, bar none. Beautiful, with careful attention to detail, lighting effects, and humans who have progressed out of Uncanny Valley.

The story is a mix of lazy erotica and interesting interpersonal dynamics. While the relationship with the wife Justine seems at first glance to be an obvious and lazy way of giving you a woman for whom you'll feel no loyalty, the relationship is merely strained, not ruined. There are multiple times that it seems like you could focus the entire VN on repairing this relationship rather than anything else. There's hope for your marriage. The "daughter" Kailey (who might not be MC's daughter, for those of you skeeved out) is just as beautiful, and fulfills a man's natural desire to be needed. The relationship with her is rushed, lazy, lustful, and uninteresting. She goes from new-found acquaintance to sex toy in an instant, with virtually no lead-up. This section of the story seems like it should have been enough of a focal point that it would have gotten a lot of attention, and been developed into a plot of seduction (on her part or MC's), with tension between desires and the impropriety of it. Instead, she surprises MC with her desire, that tension is given a little lip service in his thoughts, and then it's on to sex. It's so rushed that the eroticism is ruined. I would have found this far less disappointing if the story had focused on the eroticism rather than the pornography of showing another sex act. The side piece from work, Cassidy, provides plenty of that on her own.

Speaking of the side piece, here are more mixtures of good and bad writing. She serves to introduce us to MC's sex addiction, which might have been a very interesting story element to explore (may still be in the future, if it's treated with some seriousness and not just used as an excuse for more sex). However, her "serial monogamy," as she puts it, and her devotion to MC just doesn't fit her personality at all; she decides out of nowhere that this anonymous hookup partner is going to be her one and only, at least for a while, even though he's married. It's an obvious lie, too, since she's been having sex with the barista girl. She is, on the whole, very sketchy, and untrustworthy. However, MC blunders into telling her about the sexual tension between him and Kailey (even though that tension lasts less than a day), putting him at great risk. It seems like this oversexed receptionist is being set up to be a villain who ruins MC's life because he's too careless to: 1) not tell anyone about his extra-marital affairs, 2) keep his desire for Kailey a secret, and 3) verify that the barista she presents to MC as a sexual gift is at least old enough that he won't end up in jail. That last one is a bit more flexible because she could be legal and younger than 18 or at least 18 and still too young to legally consent, depending on the player's local laws, but since nothing establishes her age, and Miss Side Piece is being perfectly set up to blackmail (or worse) MC, it seems like just another risky point that's going to come back to hurt him. He's more careful to not get taken advantage of by the girl who thinks she might be his daughter, who wants him for nothing but curiosity, than by the slut who gets everything she wants just by offering easy sex. If it turns out that the completed VN has her as a villain who uses MC's careless sex addiction to ruin him and line her pockets, I'll be impressed at how well that was set up. If not, then me mentally shouting, "No, you fool! You can't trust this bitch at all!" was for nothing. I hope it pays off somehow.

There's a promising story with MC's boss that has yet to develop. You're given the option to take a dominant or submissive path with her. In any other kind of VN this might just be a good or bad choice, but since this is an erotic VN and she's a hot woman, I'm assuming it will lead to another sexual affair where you get to either dominate or submit to her. It's a good setup, handled well, because you're left wondering more about the effects your choices will have on MC's job than on whether you're going to eventually see her wearing a slave collar or a strap-on.

The relationship with the wife is also promising. There are a few ways it's hinted that Wife and Kailey are a little too familiar to just think of each other as strangers or rivals (so far they haven't known each other long enough to be anything but both), but instead see each other as a desired sexual partner. I'm a bit worried this is going to be forced on us, instead of being a choice. I could see the plot developing where Wife and Daughter get a little too drunk, start talking about their mutual lust for MC, and end up all over each other. If would be wonderful if we're given the choice between a bisexual wife and daughter, or keeping both of them straight, while still getting a threesome. I'm not personally into getting cuckolded, even by a woman, so I'd prefer it's a choice. It's pretty obvious that the plot is leading to Wife finding out about Kailey being MC's sex doll, and Wife being perfectly okay with it, as long as she gets dicked on the regular. That's fine, I just hope it's more interesting than the plainly predictable plot we've seen a hundred times in other games. Her being the MC's wife, and the complexity of their relationship, is another plot element that has a lot of promise. So much so that an entire VN could be written based on nothing else but this one relationship, with or without any erotic elements.

This game's visuals are simply astounding, and it's worth checking out for that alone.

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Choices I hope to see in future updates:

* When Wife confronts MC about impregnating Kailey, she demands a blood test, since the girl might not be his daughter at all. Will you accept her as your pregnant sex doll daughter without question, or verify the truth? Unrealistic but possibly beneficial choice would be to decide as the player if she's his real daughter or the daughter he's always wanted, even though she's just a stranger. The game almost, but doesn't quite, have incest. Give us a choice for it to be incest for real, or just a relationship with a sweet girl who has daddy issues.

* Wife and Kailey might be open to having sex with each other, giving you a full sex triangle. Do you encourage them to challenge their sexual limits, or do you enforce monogamy on them, allowing you to be the only one who sexually satisfies both? Either option is sexy.

* Since I happen to love the dominant/submissive relationship, I hope you are given the choice to pursue that dynamic (flipped either way, of course) with MC's boss, rather than the workplace choices so far given only leading to job success. Just an idea, but it would be fun if the boss were into pain, either as a masochistic sub or a sadist dom, but not in a way that forces the MC to be into pain as well (she wants to deliver or receive pain for her pleasure, not MC's).

* Either Miss Side Piece is actually being set up to be villainous, or we need a lot more choices governing how MC's relationship with her develops. I would have chosen not to tell her the truth about the issues with Kailey, for instance. But, sometimes your MC has to do something stupid, so I get it. I hope there's more choice given in the future, though.

* When Boss Lady finds out about MC's affair with the receptionist, I hope there's an option for it to be a threesome, and I hope that if we choose to dominate or submit to the boss, Side Piece joins in on the fun and plays along. Having two subs or doms is better than one, after all.

* Kailey and the barista are close in age, have the same interest (MC), and have similar sexual experiences (also MC) so wouldn't be too intimidated by each other. Will you encourage them to be friends or do you keep your secret by making sure they never meet? Maybe she wants to work as a barista, now that she quit her job? If you decide Wife and Kailey are bisexual now, then Kailey and Barista should get it on. Or, maybe they both think it's hot to be friends who share a sexy Daddy, like sisters.

* It's probably beyond the possibility for an erotic visual novel to give us the option to either repair MC's marriage or continue down the dark path he's on in the beginning (basically, make two stories with little in common with each other). Like I said, the marriage problems could be a whole VN without the daughter or anything else added, the sky is the limit here. But, some limited choices with her would be wonderful. Do you keep your wife happy or force her to accept your infidelity and sex addiction? Do you choose to be with Kailey instead, and let the wife go? Do you try to change the wife, and do you do it for her benefit or yours?

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sir, this is a wendys

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lol nuggies pls

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From now on the Windows/linux version of the game will also be updated on Itch along with Mac and Android. While I want nothing to do with Itch anymore I understand that there are some people who missed the Steam key deadline that may feel a certain way about it. So I decided to just update everything and be done with it.

If you get a "Key is needed" message just go to your Library and download the game from there, you should have no problems.

Have a good day.

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Just looked on the itch data search. There's no payments attached to your username.
Maybe you bought the game with a different account?

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thank you for doing that

library is?

Should I buy this game on patreon?

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i'm more interested in the office than home. being dominant & fucking over leilani & possibly take her seat in the office & maybe even climb much higher in the company hierarchy. goddamn

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hi i try to downloade chapter 5 complete for windows and saying key is needed please help

It says a key is needed for chapter 6 complete what is that about?

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is this an harem or one girl kinda deal?

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How many chapters do you intend to complete your story? Looks like a good one to check out.

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great game very good characters amazing graphics and fascinating animations everything is perfect little by little the game is developing very well 10/10 you have a good future ahead of you with this impeccable game.😍👏
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Does the permanent move to Steam and the issues with Itch mean the discontinuation of the Android version of the game or are there plans to host that elsewhere?

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As I have no other way of providing the Android version at the moment, I will continue to update it here on itch so the people who bought it get access to it.
If I find a better way in the future to provide the Android updates I will make a post here so the Android fans know how they can keep getting their updates.

This is to honor the people who supported the game as much as I can from my end but I won't be updating any public version from now on.

I hope that answers your question.

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It does, and I appreciate your reply and also the unfortunate situation you're in.

I payed for the game but that really isn't the issue.  I just want to make sure I can maintain access to what is certainly shaping up to be one of my favorite stories.

Keep up the good work.

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The game is now available on Steam Early Access (Coming Soon)

https://store.steampowered.com/app/2424810/Lost_at_Birth/

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Hi, i bought the game on itch however i would like to continue to play the game. I would prefer not having to buy the game again my email. many thanks for the great game so far.

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Hi, the game is not out on steam yet, I will make an announcement via devblog when you have to do the "migration" probably with the release of chapter 6.

Btw I suggest you delete your email out of the message as it could get you a lot of spam and dangerous scam mails.

what is the discord link?

I bought this 3 days ago. I like it but I'm not buying it again elsewhere. bummer because its good.

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Itch is doing a witch hunt against adult games developers at the moment. There's nothing I can do.

The game will be released on steam with Chapter 6, I will provide a steam key for anyone that can provide an email that has a itch purchase on my list so you won't need to purchase the game again.

I hope that clarifies the situation a bit.
Consider joining the discord and I should be able to provide more information or help.

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Just searched for it on Steam and didn't find it. When will it up there?

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With the release of Chapter 6, around late may / early June.

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THIS GAME IS NO LONGER AVAILABLE ON ITCH.IO

THEY HAVE DECIDED TO DISABLE OUR PAYOUT METHOD, PLEASE CONSIDER SUPPORTING OR GETTING THE GAME ON OTHER PLATFORM INSTEAD.



THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT.

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Man this is freaking awesome. I'm starting to feel like his world is gonna come crashing down at work. Luke he is about to be setup with his side piece by the boss or get caught or something. Same feeling also with just females in general like to talk. But it's got to the point where I'm like ok next avene something bad is about to happen with him getting caught... Let's hope not and this is just my own personal issues about trust LOL

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Love it. Great game. Cant wait fot more!

I feel sorry for those that missed the Hamilton reference 'cause I laughed so hard on that one XD

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With Chapter 5 is it considered over? Because I would like to buy only when it's complete, thank you!

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No, it's pretty much still an ongoing development.
You may have to wait quite a lot of time for the game to be completed.

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no one can download from mega
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So glad I bought this game! As it's complete, you should definitely try to get this on Steam and GOG!

I bought Chapter 4. Says Chapter 5 is released but I'm not able to download it from my purchases page/game page. Looks like i have to buy Chapter 5 if i want to play it...

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Chapter 5 is out in Early Access. You will be able to download the new chapter soon as the early access will end in some hours and it will be just regular complete edition, so your library should update with the new chapter.

I purchased Chapter 5 today but I can't download it due to download restrictions from Mega.nz.  I need an alternative download.

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Sadly there's no way that I know to add alternative download links.
Send me the details to my itch email here: V19email
I should be able to confirm the payment with just your Email Adress.
Sorry for the inconvenience, and thank you for your support.

Thank you, will do.

Actually, nevermind.  I was able to download it through Mega.nz by changing my IP address.  Thanks for your assistance.  

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I've paid 4$ but the Complete Edition for Android didn't unlock

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I'm sorry to hear that but if that's the case I can't do anything to fix it myself. You should contact itch about that.
If you paid over 3.50 it should unlock.

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gorgeous models! ❤

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More like "Lost at Girth" amairaite?

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This game has no gallery?

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when will the next chapter be released? when will the next chapter be released?

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What's differences between complete edition and non?

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The complete edition includes an extra scene at the end of each chapter. It also includes extra content in the options menu->Extra.

Starting from the next chapter (5) the complete edition will include animations while the public version won't.

Buying the complete edition will give you access to the complete edition for any new update in the future.

when the next update?

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mh?

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If I pay for Chapter 4 will I have to pay for all future chapters?!

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No.

The price includes all the future updates.

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Thank you. I will buy it then...

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Bought Chapter 4, load my end of Chapter 3 save and the credits come up straight away! Not Chapter 4! Had to go back to an earlier save replay 30 minutes of the game again, got to the end of Chapter 3 and this time, Chapter 4 loaded. A bug maybe?

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Did you overwrite chapter 3 folder with chapter 4? If you did, do not do that. Delete the chapter 3 folder and unzip chapter 4 alone.

If that's not the case, be sure that you didn't save in the endcredits scene.

I have learnt that from other AVNs, so yes, I did delete chapter 3 before installing chapter 4.

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I'm sorry you are having problems with the save.

If your savegame was from the -public edition- then that could be a problem but I would have to test that

You could try deleting the "persistent" file from the game's save folder and from the windows temp renpy folder->Game's name->Saves

Maybe send me your traceback.txt file and the save file so I can check it (itchv19games@gmail.com). But at that point I think is better for you just to start a new game and use the -ctrl- button with the "skip unread" option marked in the options until you reach the new content.

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It's already been taken dude.  But other elements have to develop..like the fact that she's not his daughter, his wife the wino, will make him decide 'her or me,' and she'll lose on that gamble...lol....and once kailey is homeless, with her dad, a whole new game of 'who's my daddy?' begins...too bad it didn't occur to dad 'why doesn't my "daughter" ever need tampons?'...wait, would that make him granddad?

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Could have done without the spoilers...

I'm a little confused.
I've downloaded Ch.3 and installed it, overwriting the ch.2 install I had before.
However, after the MC goes to bed and the 'End of chapter 2' screen there's a brief scene with him and Kailey at breakfast and then it goes to a credits screen and then to the main menu.

Is ch.3 not fully completed yet, or have I missed something?

Do not overwrite the game files, just delete the old folder and extract the new zip.

That worked, with the save files still intact.
Thank you for the information. :)

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The game is great story wise animation wise the renders look great too

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"I want her to become a successful, independent, sexually liberated woman...-"

- Cassidy

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Hello there! 

May i ask, what is the difference between the Public and the Complete edition?

I haven't played as of now, but i do think that the concept is quite cool, and the models, in particular the blonde girl, are amazing. 

Looking forward to experience this AVN!

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The complete edition includes an extra scene for each update + some other extra stuff.

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Love the game, can't wait for more. but on Android it's a real pain hitting buttons, especially when returning to the game after you save. Is it possible to increase the buttons or hitboxes or what you call them?

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I'm glad you like it.

Next update will fix all the android UI problems. It will be released very soon (in the next 15 days or so)

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This is a superb AVN, Very high quality. Looking forward to seeing how this story and the characters go, but I am invested. You are a talented storyteller, sir!

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The mega link won't load for me when trying to download the android apk,  not a huge deal as I can download on my pc if I really must but I thought I'd bring it up in case its not just a me thing

The chapter 3 is final? or there will be more chapters in the future for this story? Considering downloading it but want to know further info? Maybe a possibly of 10, 20 or 30 chapters til the story is finished fully etc...

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No, the game is still in development.

I can't give you a exact number but it will probably be more than 12 chapters.

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Ok, just wanted to get a general idea of what to expect,  looking forward to more twist and turns with the story as it unfolds.

Does this include 1 and 2? If not, where can I get them

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(All releases include all previous chapters)

Many thanks for the quick reply!!!

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