This has the potential to be very good if done correctly.
@V19: let me know if you need someone to help with spelling, grammar, typos-checking, sentence structure, etc. I'm willing to volunteer my help for free mainly cause I'm very bored with nearly limitless free time and those things tend to be rather immersion-breaking if done poorly.
The quality and the amount of invested effort this game shows when compared to most things on here, it's really good stuff. Unique-looking models and locations, strong writing, no long buildup, some music, a good title screen.
If you continue with this the way you seem to have started, you'll surely make something great.
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First chapter's pretty good. This will be one to watch.
This has the potential to be very good if done correctly.
@V19: let me know if you need someone to help with spelling, grammar, typos-checking, sentence structure, etc. I'm willing to volunteer my help for free mainly cause I'm very bored with nearly limitless free time and those things tend to be rather immersion-breaking if done poorly.
VN fans, try this one. Above average story and models - hope they stay with it! <3
We will watch your career with great interest!
ps. if you need a proofreader, I can try, but I don't have much experience :D.
Don't judge my kinks and I won't judge yours.
Judging your kinks is my kink.
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Really solid start so far. Loving the high quality renders, unique characters and solid writing so far. An awesome job so far.
I was honestly a little disappointed I reached the end of the current version as quick as I did. Left me wanting more.
Definitely will be watching this one for updates.
Very interesting so far. Keep it coming.
The quality and the amount of invested effort this game shows when compared to most things on here, it's really good stuff. Unique-looking models and locations, strong writing, no long buildup, some music, a good title screen.
If you continue with this the way you seem to have started, you'll surely make something great.
Looks really promising, looking forward to more.
Lots of potencial, can't wait for the next update
Really short game (10-30 min or so) but an interesting start.
It's a game I look forward to following, Keep up the good work :)