can you tell us all the future fetishes / tags the game will have, i hate sharing MMF, swinging, ntr so it will be nice to know all this, also will it be possible to have both the wife and the daughter? maybe some kind of harem?
It's good I enjoy the story so far, the renders are top notch quality. Very well designed characters and pretty well written plot so far.
My only complaint is that the episodes are too short. an hour or so per episode. with the time frame between the 1st & 2nd episode release I was expecting a longer playthrough. I just completed both chapter 1&2 in less than 2 hours. Just something to think about.
It felt like half as much content in chapter 2, but the story that's there is enjoyable. The characters are intriguing and their actions are understandable, although they're equally as easy to judge. It's a good dynamic and makes the story interesting.
I liked your style in this game, it is like reading a book, you see the story of the main character through the eyes of a spectator, it is a lot different from other VNs that I played but it gave a unique style to the game. About the sex scenes, they are indeed short, but I think it is good for us to understand more the situation of the characters themselves, maybe in the future when we already know more of the character's personalities those scenes may become a bit longer. I do enjoy some good stories, as well as the erotic aspect of the game, and I will wait for new releases to play
It's got promise, but it seems a lot of the renders in this chapter are not POV style, but random angles / third person narrative style (like in the restaurant). It gives the feeling that you are not the MC, but someone else in the room watching. If you are telling a story through the MC's eyes, it would be a lot better with more POV, and if the characters look directly at you, and not everywhere else. Definitely not all the time, but more times than not, otherwise it's pretty hard to connect with any of the characters.
Not to say the camera angles are bad, they are pretty good, thus the initial statement, I just think it's a bit too many.
The sex scenes are a bit too quick, with a bit too much talk during the action. Better off to have a narrative here instead of a conversation.
This has the potential to be very good if done correctly.
@V19: let me know if you need someone to help with spelling, grammar, typos-checking, sentence structure, etc. I'm willing to volunteer my help for free mainly cause I'm very bored with nearly limitless free time and those things tend to be rather immersion-breaking if done poorly.
The quality and the amount of invested effort this game shows when compared to most things on here, it's really good stuff. Unique-looking models and locations, strong writing, no long buildup, some music, a good title screen.
If you continue with this the way you seem to have started, you'll surely make something great.
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Excellent game the graphics and story set it apart from much of the fair today.
can you tell us all the future fetishes / tags the game will have, i hate sharing MMF, swinging, ntr so it will be nice to know all this, also will it be possible to have both the wife and the daughter? maybe some kind of harem?
Best of luck with the game.
It's good I enjoy the story so far, the renders are top notch quality. Very well designed characters and pretty well written plot so far.
My only complaint is that the episodes are too short. an hour or so per episode. with the time frame between the 1st & 2nd episode release I was expecting a longer playthrough. I just completed both chapter 1&2 in less than 2 hours. Just something to think about.
It felt like half as much content in chapter 2, but the story that's there is enjoyable. The characters are intriguing and their actions are understandable, although they're equally as easy to judge. It's a good dynamic and makes the story interesting.
I liked your style in this game, it is like reading a book, you see the story of the main character through the eyes of a spectator, it is a lot different from other VNs that I played but it gave a unique style to the game. About the sex scenes, they are indeed short, but I think it is good for us to understand more the situation of the characters themselves, maybe in the future when we already know more of the character's personalities those scenes may become a bit longer. I do enjoy some good stories, as well as the erotic aspect of the game, and I will wait for new releases to play
It's got promise, but it seems a lot of the renders in this chapter are not POV style, but random angles / third person narrative style (like in the restaurant). It gives the feeling that you are not the MC, but someone else in the room watching. If you are telling a story through the MC's eyes, it would be a lot better with more POV, and if the characters look directly at you, and not everywhere else. Definitely not all the time, but more times than not, otherwise it's pretty hard to connect with any of the characters.
Not to say the camera angles are bad, they are pretty good, thus the initial statement, I just think it's a bit too many.
The sex scenes are a bit too quick, with a bit too much talk during the action. Better off to have a narrative here instead of a conversation.
First chapter's pretty good. This will be one to watch.
This has the potential to be very good if done correctly.
@V19: let me know if you need someone to help with spelling, grammar, typos-checking, sentence structure, etc. I'm willing to volunteer my help for free mainly cause I'm very bored with nearly limitless free time and those things tend to be rather immersion-breaking if done poorly.
VN fans, try this one. Above average story and models - hope they stay with it! <3
We will watch your career with great interest!
ps. if you need a proofreader, I can try, but I don't have much experience :D.
Don't judge my kinks and I won't judge yours.
Judging your kinks is my kink.
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Really solid start so far. Loving the high quality renders, unique characters and solid writing so far. An awesome job so far.
I was honestly a little disappointed I reached the end of the current version as quick as I did. Left me wanting more.
Definitely will be watching this one for updates.
Very interesting so far. Keep it coming.
The quality and the amount of invested effort this game shows when compared to most things on here, it's really good stuff. Unique-looking models and locations, strong writing, no long buildup, some music, a good title screen.
If you continue with this the way you seem to have started, you'll surely make something great.
Looks really promising, looking forward to more.
Lots of potencial, can't wait for the next update
Really short game (10-30 min or so) but an interesting start.
It's a game I look forward to following, Keep up the good work :)